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Alone in the Meadow by ~Twisted-Bat:iconTwisted-Bat:



Move along the green meadows.
Butterflies flitter.
Bunnies hop.
Birds sing.
But all thou shall feel is the regret.
The deep rooted regret thou so loathes.
Thou, alone in the meadow, oversees the dark clouds.
Clouds of grief.
Clouds of greed.
Thy concience is in a web.
Lost.
Alone.
Sanity has gone.
Forever resting.
Forever at peace.
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Ehhh....random thing I wrote for English. Liked it a bit so it's here now ^^

Well.....that's about it ^^; Not a very good poem (what a happy post for V-Day!) but....uhhh....yeah.
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*Invader-Sideos:iconInvader-Sideos: Feb 14, 2008, 9:50:09 AM Mood: Joy
Awww, tis so saad D:
But tis a good poem! Highly expressive and effective I think.

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~Twisted-Bat:iconTwisted-Bat: Feb 14, 2008, 9:58:47 AM
I like sad poems.
Thank ye muchly! :D

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~Jupit3r:iconJupit3r: Feb 14, 2008, 11:11:10 AM
succinct yes vast!

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~Twisted-Bat:iconTwisted-Bat: Feb 14, 2008, 11:18:32 AM
S'cuse me?

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~Jupit3r:iconJupit3r: Feb 14, 2008, 11:20:26 AM
I mean it's a short poem with a lot meaning.

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~Jupit3r:iconJupit3r: Feb 14, 2008, 11:21:21 AM
arghhh. I just realised I typo'ed the 'yes'

I mean to say "succinct yet vast" :O_o:

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~Twisted-Bat:iconTwisted-Bat: Feb 14, 2008, 11:31:31 AM
Oh...I didn't understand ^^;

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~Twisted-Bat:iconTwisted-Bat: Feb 14, 2008, 11:31:44 AM
Ah...thank you :aww:

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~InvaderMari:iconInvaderMari: Feb 14, 2008, 2:06:13 PM
Very descriptive, and yet very vague. It creates so many emotions, and it makes me think of Nathaniel Hawthorne...
It takes Nature and then turns it into something dark, and yet I still get a peaceful feel from it. It's almost like a soul being trapped in Summerland...It's amazingly awesome.

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